India is a subcontinent. It has important mountains, rivers and valleys. Two of the biggests mountains are the Hindu Kush and the Himalayas. One of the rivers is the Ganges. The mountais help to block cold north winds from reaching India. This seasonal winds are calles monsoons . This winds shaped India´s climate.
The Harappans was and old civilisation. As earliest communities are locate near rivers, because there they have more sources of the river and from the land, and the Harappans civilization were not the exeption. Some communities that stay near the rivers, were placed in the planned cities.
The believe of "what was the religion of the Harappans" is not already know, but archeologists had found some items that maibe were used for religius rituals. That was one part of the Harappans culture, that archeologist know about this comunity. They were a group that expand their culture, they expanded about 500,000 square miles, from their territory. Some of the culture they expand was, their form of weighting and their form of measurement. They also trade somo of the things they use to work in different activities, like thier instruments they used for agriculture.
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Check spelling. There are many words with mistakes. You miss some capital letters and make typographic errors.
Try to change the name of the link with something like "India" to make readers to be more interested.
As you may noticed I left my book at your home so I couldn´t look for the essential questions. I´ll finish to check on Monday. Good work.
You missed to put in yellow the words of the dictionary. i think we may look for an internal link in the blog, let me look for it.
1. Paragraph: pay attention to numbers in the third sentence. Monsoons in yellow. Take a look to `In addition` look for another way to connect both ideas.
Check spelling: big (biggest)
2. paragraph: Even you are answering the essential question, remember that this page may be visited by someone that doesn´t knows the book so you must do and introduction, for example: As all communities, Harapans.... because...
3. paragraph: They didn´t belief in Christianism, the author use it to make an example, they haven´t discovered which was their religion. Take a look to your book page 223. What about pictographs? and the expansions? You didn´t answered the question.
Check: civilisation. exeption. know. maibe
Good work.
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