During the Han Dynasty, Chinese were the only community that knew to make silk. The trades routes of the silk were called Silk Roads, in these roads there were not only for silk exchange, there were some other thingslike paper, oil and Asian horses, among other things. The silk road began in
The ideas of the Confucianism and of the Daoism had a big influence in Chinese belief system. The idea of the Confucius still important today and has influenced the philosophies of
The Hans made a lot of advances in many things, specially in agriculture, paper and silk. All of these improvements and inventions made life easier for the people.
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Take a look to this page.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/ancient/egyptians/
1. paragraph: great!
2. paragraph: A little bit confuse. check second sentence. I want you to change the last sentence because it is the same that appears in the book.
check spelling: tome? inflective?
3. paragraph: Remember the difference between improving and inventing. Try to be more specific in the way those things were important.
VOCABULARY
Try to be more specific. Try to make a difference between chapters or make an alphabetic organization. You repeat some words, take a look to that
Check: Diffucion, Trans-eurasia, bureaucracry, Daoism, filial piety, Confucianism, Mandate of Heaven, Dynasty cicle, Buddhism, Siddhartha Gautama, dahrma, karma, brahanism,
OK, good work. there are some mistakes, remember me in class to show you them.
Sé qu debería haberte corregido esto ayer pero estuve en el Tilatá un buen rato y sólo hasta ahora llegué. Perdón.
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