domingo, 27 de enero de 2008

Ancient China- The Qin and the Han

The new ruler of China came from the state of Qin; the new emperor took the name of Shin Huangdi. He would unify and expand China. Shin Huandgi believed in a legalistic form of ruling, He end some wars that were delivering in those times. For unifying China, Shin Huangdi had a lot of power to noble people, he made some lands to be under his control, joining the land he built some roads and set a government for many different things.

A military general named Liu Bang, defeat the Qin forces, he ended the civil war and reunified China. In 202 B.C he started the Han Dynasty. He continued the form of ruling of the Qin, he used a central government and he set up a bureaucracy.

The Han was industrious people whose civilization prospered. Live in the time of the Han Dynasty was around the farming, poor farmers had to work more than reach farmers, but both had to work in the same. The farmers use the clothes they could use.

2 comentarios:

Pilar Osorio Lora dijo...

1. paragraph: great!
2. paragraph: A little bit confuse. check second sentence. I want you to change the last sentence because it is the same that appears in the book.
check spelling: tome? inflective?
3. paragraph: Remember the difference between improving and inventing. Try to be more specific in the way those things were important.

Pilar Osorio Lora dijo...

ok. The same thing. You made some mistakes but I will show you them.